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Lawrence always reminded the novel of its promise to offer something new. In his essays, where he insists that the novel ‘has got to present us with new, really new feelings, a whole line of new emotion, which will get us out of the rut’ (Phoenix, ed. Edward D. McDonald, London, Heinemann, 1936, p. 520). In his letters, as we shall see below. And of course — proof of the pudding — in the novels themselves. The last paragraph of The Rainbow tries its best to persuade us that people will ‘cast off their horny covering of disintegration, that new, clean, naked bodies would issue to a new germination, to a new growth, rising to the light and the wind and the clean rain of heaven’. This was Lawrence’s optimistic new testament — delivered before the world disintegrated into war.
It is in Women in Love nevertheless that he really delivers his promise, despite the catastrophe of the war, which he saw as a kind of death-wish of western civilisation. Here we can observe, almost scientifically, how this ‘wonderful and terrible novel’ (letter to E.M. Forster, November 1916) emerges iridescent (a favourite adjective) from the carapace of the established fictional form. Jane Austen had proposed that a novel should ideally present two contrasting couples in a country town, and Lawrence does not disdain this structure; and it was George Eliot (he remarked approvingly) who first ‘put the action all inside’, a procedure he is happy to follow. But here the superficial similarities end. The experiences of Rupert Birkin with Ursula Brangwen, and of Gerald Crich with her sister Gudrun — not to mention the relationship between Rupert and Gerald themselves — are as far removed from those between Elizabeth Bennet with Mr Darcy and her sister Jane with Mr Bingley in Pride and Prejudice as could be inferred from the century that separates the two novels. And George Eliot would not have recognized what goes on inside Lawrence’s characters: the strange fields of force — electric and magnetic — that govern their thoughts, moods, and actions. (Perhaps Mary Shelley might have understood better?)
It is not just that Lawrence takes us deep into the earth (with the coal mine and the lake) and into the thin, upper air of the mountains; not just that there is love and death in equal measure. It is what happens underneath what happens that counts; the patterning of forces that work on the characters and lead them, through a precarious social life perceived likewise with unusual intensity, to their inevitable destiny. As Lawrence wrote in the (unpublished) Foreword, ‘I should like the time to remain unfixed, so that the bitterness of the war may be taken for granted in the characters’ (Women in Love, eds David Farmer, Lindeth Vasey, and John Worthen, Cambridge, CUP, 1987, p. 485; all subsequent page references are to this edition). This bitterness is just one of the ‘forces’ involved. Lawrence had provided the prescription for his novel in the famous letter to Edward Garnett in June 1914, as he was setting to work on The Sisters (which would develop into The Rainbow and Women in Love). He tells Garnett that ‘that which is physic — non-human, in humanity, is more interesting to me than the old-fashioned human element’, and elaborates this in a remarkable image which functions as a divining rod to lead us through what is to come in Lawrence’s fiction:
You mustn’t look in my novel for the old stable ego of the character. There is another ego, according to whose action the ego is unrecognisable, and passes through, as it were, allotropic states which it needs a deeper sense than any we’ve been used to exercise, to discover are states of the same single radically-unchanged element.
Here, then, is where the newness of Lawrence’s project declares itself; which will guide him in the ‘period of crisis’ he was living through. And where, it is safe to say, readers tend to divide into those who have confidence in the author, and are prepared to ‘exercise [that] deeper sense’ to follow him, and those who become impatient, hankering still for the well-trodden ways of fiction, where things go on happening all the time but where we are not invited to explore the patterning that gives coherence and meaning to these things.

Lawrence’s potent symbol of the phoenix in its CUP incarnation
The ground rule of Women in Love is that the ground itself is continually shifting; there are no rules, except for this one. Everything in the universe is always in flux, in motion. Lawrence wrote in a poem (‘Fidelity’) of ‘the wonderful slow flowing of the sapphire’, and this creative flow, this permanent deliquescence and renewal, acts on his characters too and their relationships. Both couples function on a polarized axis between attraction and repulsion, love and hate; terms which are set up immediately, in each case. Development takes the form of alternation rather than alteration, as the ‘two poles of one force, like two angels or two demons’ (p. 199) wrestle with each other. Under the magnifying glass of Lawrence’s vision, the tremulations of ordinary, socialized life are recorded as storms, tempests. Again, this is a feature that critics of Lawrence fail to register, or to understand: that what he ‘sees’, and presents to us, is a heightened and enhanced account –the reverse of slow motion, though with the same intensifying effect — of what is at once truthful and (as he had warned us) unrecognisable: human emotion as we have never experienced it in fiction before — though we are used to it in poetry. (I am thinking in particular of the poetry of William Blake, whose prophetic books surge from the same depths to a similar clash of opposing energies.)
We may well ask ourselves the pertinent question: with all this radical instability, these tremors and convulsions, how do we make sense of the characters and keep up with their relationships at all; in a word, how do we read the novel? My answer would be that Lawrence creates coherence in Women in Love as Shakespeare does in his plays, by the structural use of imagery. It is through consistent, contrasted images that he maintains the difference between Birkin and Ursula on the one hand and Gerald and Gudrun on the other. Each couple has an imagistic signature, which remains indelible throughout the upheavals of the text.
From the beginning, Ursula is associated with light and flowers, organic growth and integration: ‘underneath, in the darkness, something was coming to pass’ in her (p. 9). She represents (for Birkin) ‘the perfect candour of creation’ (p. 368). Whereas her sister Gudrun is and feels shut out from this system, an ironic and resentful onlooker. Significantly, she is always the more visualised of the two, in her startling outfits of bright, even strident colours. Gudrun is ‘the more beautiful and attractive […] Ursula […] more physical, more womanly’ (p. 83). The adjectives come from different orders, different worlds, and imply the different trajectories of the two different young women. These trajectories are made possible by the partners Lawrence assigns to each — partners who are created to live out their own complementary fates.
Ursula is drawn to Rupert Birkin via an instinctive antagonism (and readers may well understand her initial reaction to this awkward and opinionated schoolmaster). It is Birkin whose reflections and arguments lead us into the novel’s exploratory centre; he whose awkwardness derives from an impatience with conventions and received ideas. He resists ‘the old way of love […] as a bondage, a conscription’ (we note the latter term; p. 199); he insists on seeing humanity as a stage in the evolutionary process. Ursula’s antagonism transforms gradually into a recognition and a need; a need which is reciprocated by Birkin himself, and beautifully expressed in what is effectively a proposal: ‘There is a golden light in you, which I wish you would give me’ (p. 249). Birkin has reflected, earlier, that he ‘can’t get right at the really growing part of me’ (p. 125); it is the rooted Ursula who enables him in this respect, as the two are progressively grafted together.

‘Pity’, colour print by William Blake, c. 1795, illustrating ‘pity like a naked newborn babe,/Striding the blast’ from Macbeth, Act I, scene 7. © Tate Gallery. Cf. Birkin to Ursula in chapter 14: ‘I want love that is like sleep, like being born again, vulnerable as a baby that just comes into the world’. The image of the ‘naked infant’ is used three times in less than a page.
Gudrun’s disposition by contrast attracts the interlocking attention of Gerald Crich, son of the local mine-owner. Gerald has the mark of Cain, having killed his brother in an accident with a gun in childhood, and being responsible for the death of his sister by drowning at his party. He tries to compensate by applying his dominant will to the efficient running of the mine, and (as the novel opens) by forming a relationship with Gudrun to fill the vacancy of which he is afraid in himself.
The key chapters for these two counterpointed relationships are 23, ‘Excurse’, and 24, ‘Death and Love’. Occurring two-thirds of the way through the novel, they are as it were the tipping point from which there is no possibility for either couple of reversal, return. In the first of these, Birkin and Ursula spend a day out together, negotiating a fearful quarrel in which Ursula denounces Birkin for all his faults, and walks away, throwing at him the rings he has given her; before returning some moments later with a flower as a peace offering. The day turns on this hinge. ‘Everything had become simple again, quite simple, the complexity gone into nowhere’ (p. 310); and after an idyllic high tea en amoureux, the lovers find consummation under the trees in Sherwood Forest (p. 320).
But in the contrastive chapter that immediately follows, the logic of the images closes in fatefully on Gerald and Gudrun. Fearful of the void after his father’s death, Gerald bears down on Gudrun encumbered with mineral images of iron and stone. (At one point, he is even described as ‘radio-active’ (p. 332).) The scene where he comes uninvited into her bedroom, and is momentarily calmed by her complicit response — which leaves her, who has previously sought this knowledge of him, ‘destroyed into perfect consciousness’ (p. 345) — is an anticipation of the final scene in the alien cold of the mountains. Here, as Gudrun peels away from him under Loerke’s influence, he panics, and finally lapses out of life after a violent expression of his own inadequacy. Gudrun then simply disappears; which also fulfils the logic of the novel, since her tale is told; leaving Ursula and Birkin to conclude with yet another loving argument.

‘The Ghost of a Flea’ c.1819-20 William Blake © Tate Gallery.
Cf. ‘There passed through Gudrun’s mind Blake’s representation of the soul of a flea. She wanted to fit it to Loerke’ (chapter 30).
Conscious of the stylistic peculiarity of his novel, Lawrence defended in his Foreword ‘the continual, slightly modified repetition […] this pulsing, frictional to-and-fro, which works up to culmination’ (p. 486). But this authorial witness doesn’t quite prepare the reader for a recurrent and revealing feature — enacting the ‘to-and-fro’ — that composes sentences in a certain way, and then structures these sentences into paragraphs and larger units. So ingrained is Lawrence’s determination to see things in terms of polarity, dynamic and creative opposites, that sentences come ready seeded with qualifications and adversitives (such as ‘but’, ‘yet’, ‘still’, ‘however’, ‘nevertheless’, ‘at the same time’), which create an atmosphere of such uncertainty, possibility, that the reader is kept continually on their toes. It is unnecessary to offer examples, since they appear on almost every page; but the thirty pages of chapter 8, ‘Breadalby’, provide a switch-back ride through all points of the emotional and intellectual compass. (It is curious, almost amusing, that towards the end of the novel Gerald replies to Birkin’s question is he all right? with an attempt to short-circuit the system, saying ‘All right and all wrong, don’t they become synonymous, somewhere?’ (p. 439).)
This stylistic reflex it is, also, which doesn’t allow one point of view to dominate. As Lawrence maintained in an essay: ‘If you nail anything down, in the novel, either it kills the novel, or the novel gets up and walks away with the nail’ (Phoenix, p. 528). Women in Love is written with such openness and ambiguity, such tentativeness in reaching forward, that it does indeed walk away with the nail.
© Damian Grant, 2021


SOME RESPONSES TO GEORGE CALDERON: EDWARDIAN GENIUS
‘This meticulous yet nimble book is bound to remain the definitive account of Calderon’s life’ Charlotte Jones, The Times Literary Supplement
‘The effort of detection, it must be said, was worth it. The biography is a delight to read.’ Emeritus Professor Laurence Brockliss, The London Magazine
‘It is a masterly synthesis of your own approach with scholarship and very judicious discussion of the evidence.’ Emeritus Professor Catherine Andreyev, historian
‘This comprehensive, meticulously researched and highly readable biography, which the author describes as a “story” rather than an academic biography…’ Michael Pursglove, East-West Review
‘A monumental scholarly masterpiece that gives real insight into how the Edwardians viewed the world.’Arch Tait, Translator of Natalya Rzhevskaya’s Memoirs of a Wartime Interpreter
‘The book is written with great assurance and the reader always feels in safe hands. I liked the idea of it being a story and I read it the same way I would read a novel.’ Harvey Pitcher, writer
‘Presents the Edwardian age, and Calderon in particular, as new and forward-looking.’ Emeritus Professor Michael Alexander, in Trinity College, Oxford, Report 2017-18
A review by DAMIAN GRANT appears in the comments to Calderonia’s 7 September post.
A review by JOHN DEWEY appears on Amazon UK.

‘Another culture’ (A series of seven posts)
Sam2, aka our son James Miles, worked in Japan as a teacher from 2011 to 2014 (his first job when he got back to England was to set up Calderonia!). My wife Alison visited Jim in Japan in 2013. Jim has been urging me to visit Japan myself, and our current plan is to go there together in 2023. Although apprehensive about the long plane journey, I do want to go. I have been ‘engaging’ with Japan through English-language books ever since I bought The Penguin Book of Japanese Verse in 1970; I would like to experience the reality.
‘Japan’
So, the sequence of haiku and senryu above (click on it to enlarge) is literary shots of Japan from the West — that is why the title is in inverted commas. It’s how Japan has affected me without my knowing Japan in the flesh. ‘Wasabi’, by the way, is that green paste made from the Mountain Hollyhock that you have with sushi and takes the roof off your mouth. In the next six posts, which will take us up to Christmas, I shall look at some other glimpses I have gained of Japan through books, and both Jim and Alison will talk about their own experience of the country in separate posts.
I should acknowledge that three of the above poems were published in HQ Poetry Magazine and Blithe Spirit, 2019, but written many years before.
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SOME RESPONSES TO GEORGE CALDERON: EDWARDIAN GENIUS
‘This meticulous yet nimble book is bound to remain the definitive account of Calderon’s life’ Charlotte Jones, The Times Literary Supplement
‘The effort of detection, it must be said, was worth it. The biography is a delight to read.’ Emeritus Professor Laurence Brockliss, The London Magazine
‘It is a masterly synthesis of your own approach with scholarship and very judicious discussion of the evidence.’ Emeritus Professor Catherine Andreyev, historian
‘This comprehensive, meticulously researched and highly readable biography, which the author describes as a “story” rather than an academic biography…’ Michael Pursglove, East-West Review
‘A monumental scholarly masterpiece that gives real insight into how the Edwardians viewed the world.’Arch Tait, Translator of Natalya Rzhevskaya’s Memoirs of a Wartime Interpreter
‘The book is written with great assurance and the reader always feels in safe hands. I liked the idea of it being a story and I read it the same way I would read a novel.’ Harvey Pitcher, writer
‘Presents the Edwardian age, and Calderon in particular, as new and forward-looking.’ Emeritus Professor Michael Alexander, in Trinity College, Oxford, Report 2017-18
A review by DAMIAN GRANT appears in the comments to Calderonia’s 7 September post.
A review by JOHN DEWEY appears on Amazon UK.